For my descriptive essay, we are required to go to the writing lab at least once for help on our paper. This came as no surprise to me considering that for every paper we do in this class has to be seen by the writing lab before it is turned in. Fortunately enough for me, I was seen by the last lady that helped me with my last paper. This to me was better because I already knew the way she worked and her style of fixing things on my papers.
We then proceeded with my paper about talking and explaining the blog and what was happening in it and what it was all about. We then discussed the timeline and she agreed that it was a major help in the essay. We then went on and fixed some of the stuff i had already written. Things such as making them longer, short, and putting more detail into the essay. Considering it was a descriptive essay, i figures the more details the better.
We then talked about the ending which I was defiantly having trouble on. I could not decide weather I should just end it by telling how the video ended or should i try to express how the video blog made me feel before, after, and during the video. Her advise about the ending was that I should tell the reader how the video blog made me feel.
During the whole time of the session i felt that it was very productive once again and that next time for my next assignment I want to try to get everything that they would tell me during the session so that way I know that I'm getting a lot out of not only my English class but the help they provide there as well.
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